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Thursday, 23 April 2020

free writing


Today I'll be doing some free writing I hope you enjoy the story 


Once Upon a Time 3000-year-old Village We're pandas tigers live in harmony Until one day a  massive lightning Blast hit the middle of the village splitting it
In half on one we're pandas and on the other side There were tigers.  tiger 
had  skip no food when a panda came over Tigers  a  Soon the pandas  figured
out the tigers were eating their own family  and went away to another Village
Tigers followed   and soon started stealthily taking out everyone in the village
  until there was one panda remaining   the last panda foot back and defeating 5
Tigers it was very injured  he ran as fast as he could but he was no match for the
Tigers speed now the pandas are endangered 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Hunter. I like how the idea of your story is Tigers vs Pandas. You have used some great words in your story like 'in harmony' and 'stealthily'. I think that it is very sad that Pandas are endangered.

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