I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hunter you should do way more so they can see all your work and not just showing the graph and show people who to do it but i do like who you are showing your graph but you should add some info good job
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those are good results for long jump
ReplyDeleteHunter you should do way more so they can see all your work and not just showing the graph and show people who to do it but i do like who you are showing your graph but you should add some info good job
ReplyDeleteHi Hunter
ReplyDeleteI think that the graph is good but maybe you could add why you made the blog about long jump.
Why did you only add the long jump results??
Hi Hunter this is Skye i like you blog post.
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