It knocked me over …
“Drop me down here, seems like a good spot to land”.
“I'm heading into the jungle now to look for a so-called alien”.
I walked and walked and chopped and chopped through the Jungle.
As I got deeper into the jungle I heard a loud growl I've never heard before.
Is this an alien? I kept walking through the jungle until I found a spaceship.
There is definitely an alien if there's a spaceship around. I went into the spaceship.
There was this weird language written everywhere on the screens.
I didn't want to press any buttons just in case one of them sent off a trap and killed me instantly
or blew up the ship. I found some alien weapons. I'm taking one just in case the alien tries to kill me.
“Mother base I have found the alien ship I'm sending you my coordinates for an evac”.
“ go to the point we will pick you up”. “I'm heading there now”. “It's knocked me over” shing...
“I'm heading into the jungle now to look for a so-called alien”.
I walked and walked and chopped and chopped through the Jungle.
As I got deeper into the jungle I heard a loud growl I've never heard before.
Is this an alien? I kept walking through the jungle until I found a spaceship.
There is definitely an alien if there's a spaceship around. I went into the spaceship.
There was this weird language written everywhere on the screens.
I didn't want to press any buttons just in case one of them sent off a trap and killed me instantly
or blew up the ship. I found some alien weapons. I'm taking one just in case the alien tries to kill me.
“Mother base I have found the alien ship I'm sending you my coordinates for an evac”.
“ go to the point we will pick you up”. “I'm heading there now”. “It's knocked me over” shing...
Awesoem work Hunter. I love how you have used a rhetorical question in this paragraph. You have also used speech marks for direct speech which is awesome! You have a great idea for this story, keep up the awesome work!
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