I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Hunter, Its Sharney fro 7/8 SH, Next time you could probably put your script on here so then its more interesting for the reader. Next time could you write more details on your blog post. Could you send a link to the music? You could've put your video on this blog post. If it was longer it would be more interesting. Anyway have a nice day bye. 😁 From Sharney
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Hi Hunter, Its Sharney fro 7/8 SH, Next time you could probably put your script on here so then its more interesting for the reader. Next time could you write more details on your blog post. Could you send a link to the music? You could've put your video on this blog post. If it was longer it would be more interesting. Anyway have a nice day bye. 😁 From Sharney
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