I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 17 August 2018
“Somebody once told
“Somebody once told me oh my god! Did you just poop your pants Logan”. “No I didn't James Left his chocolate cake on my chair so it looks like a poo myself .” “James get here now.” “ What the hell do you want my my mum told me to get here what do you want me to be here Your boss rang so get down to the station”. “Damn right your mum told you get down to the station you leave chocolate cake on Logan seat now looks like he poo himself ”. “Well I'm sorry” “sorry is not enough now you got to live the chocolate cake off Logans bum “.
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Good to see your starting to use speech marks in your writing now. I think you may need to read your work to check it makes sense though. Poor Logan! What a mess!
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