I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I liked how you gave photos on your slide to show the badges. Maybe next time you could add what you are writing about and why you posted it. Did you like doing this ?
Maybe you could add some words describing why Williams medals were bestowed upon him during the war. We will have to try the recipe next time your here.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Hunter,
ReplyDeleteIts Ian from Yaldhurst Model School.
I liked how you gave photos on your slide to show the badges. Maybe next time you could add what you are writing about and why you posted it.
Did you like doing this ?
yes thank you
DeleteMaybe you could add some words describing why Williams medals were bestowed upon him during the war. We will have to try the recipe next time your here.
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